Jane and Yato walk silently through the moon-lit street. Any
lights that were on are now off. The traffic lights show green and they walk
on. Jane is a young lady of 13. She is fair-haired and her face is flawless, with
the exception of a birth mark on her lower cheek. It is brown, but it is yellow from a
distance. Yato, on the other hand, is someone you wouldn’t call handsome. He
has a face with many freckles and wears glasses that have never suited him. His
brown hair sits in a bowl cut. Silently, they walk on.
Jessica, I like the way you incorporated words into your writing that help to create an image e.g. flawless. You have used the prompt creatively and built up an interesting paragraph. Well done.
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